This is an original song I wrote. I hope you all enjoy it. Feel free to leave feedback here or on youtube!
Lyrics:
Where we’re going, we haven’t been before
And time will heal this open sore
Let’s start something so great
That only good fate will was ashore
We make our choices, we live our life
Only time can tell which was right
Let’s head down this long journey
So that we can escape into the black of night
Once you were there
Once we could share
Our deepest dreams
Once we would dare
Once we could care
About living free
Together, tonight
Sometimes, I guess I wanted more
And maybe, it’s right to shut the door
You’ll hold a place in my heart
Maybe one day we’ll know where to start
Because, once you were there
Once, we could share
Our deepest dreams
Once we would dare
Once we could care
About living free
Together, tonight
©2011
testingtruechange 
Beautiful song.
Thanks!
Another wonderful song! : )
Thanks 🙂
cool, glad to see you,
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Thanks, was a bit out of the loop for a while, but should be back now!
Good song! Who is the singer?
Thanks! I am the singer 🙂
Oh! 🙂 That is great!
Thank you 😀
cool.
Thanks for checking it out!
very nice! thanks for sharing
Thanks! I’m glad that you liked it!
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I totally enjoyed the first 2 stanzas the most. Thanks and enjoy the rally.
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Thanks, I appreciate that!
its touching, and moving and all inbetween.
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thank you so much, this song means a great deal to me 🙂
Okay so I’m not one to comment much on youtube songs… but honestly the words to this song are amazingly beautiful and very heartfelt! This really could be an amazing song (I mean it is but once mastered… it really could give a wow) I come from a history of music and a writer myself… i know a good song when I hear one:) Work hard on this one;) it’s worth the perfection… the potential in this is ready to explode! Beautiful lyrics, beautiful melody and all from a beautiful soul:) thanks for sharing!
Thank you so much for the comment, it really means a lot to me 🙂 This song is very close to my heart and I hope to maybe record it in studio one day! Again thank you so much for the comment, it made my day 🙂
listened again… oh the greatness of this melody and the power of the words! great great great job:) (can you tell I’m a lover of music:) )
Thank you so much, I am glad you love music, the ability to send a message and reach people is so hard to do, but often a song can find a way 🙂
Happy Potluck.
going musical is way to cool.
Thank you 🙂
Happy Potluck.
going musical is way to cool.
Love it …thanks for sharing
Thank you, I appreciate the comment!
Nice song. Thanks for sharing:)
Thanks for checking it out 🙂
Oh wow this is amazing that you composed and song it just blows me away. I have some lyrics not many but I can’t sing not even a little lol You did a fantastic job!
Thanks 🙂 I will check your lyrics out I’m sure they are great!